Not bad for a first FF movie
I noticed you made them walk frame by frame. Tweening is the way to go here. It's much easier and looks just like the game. That's how come my animation is so smooth. Even if you're really good at FBF, it will never look right. Plus it takes a long time just to animate them walking! Well it's a pretty good story, just needs to be smoother. And like I said, tweening will take care of that for ya ;)